tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-151222981335065254.post3539788343405064320..comments2018-07-29T11:43:08.160+01:00Comments on Light up the dark: Eleven birdsMark Sargeanthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16382265118423123002noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-151222981335065254.post-89644963954462789302011-03-27T21:30:07.780+01:002011-03-27T21:30:07.780+01:00Thanks CGP, I'm glad you liked it.Thanks CGP, I'm glad you liked it.Mark Sargeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16382265118423123002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-151222981335065254.post-79208068946609389622011-03-21T19:31:05.869+00:002011-03-21T19:31:05.869+00:00oh I can understand why your neighbour is upset! E...oh I can understand why your neighbour is upset! Excellent poem, i really like the ending...Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-151222981335065254.post-46587468870930994172011-03-18T20:30:17.590+00:002011-03-18T20:30:17.590+00:00Thanks JK; the birds keep on arriving for us, and ...Thanks JK; the birds keep on arriving for us, and I imagine our dear old neighbour is getting increasingly madder!Mark Sargeanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16382265118423123002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-151222981335065254.post-13275211829694184162011-03-18T19:29:46.187+00:002011-03-18T19:29:46.187+00:00love "smoke filling her hair, her face harden...love "smoke filling her hair, her face hardening like gouache". Sounds exactly like she blames you. A beautifully decribed picture of the cat bringing home his prey through the cat flap to lay at your feet, and a beautiful cat too ;)practicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05683589481404422674noreply@blogger.com