Monday, 28 March 2011

bat

glazed with milk and honey:
the sky hangs with its mouth open.
folded in its curves, a lone bat skitters,
following the trails left by bees.

3 comments:

Jade said...

Very original!! I love this stone... uniquely beautiful word choice.

Thanks for visiting & commenting on my blog. :) :)

Barb said...

You can capture the essence - "milk and honey" and the "trails left by bees" are both wonderful lines conjuring many connections in my mind.

Mark Sargeant said...

Thank you both for your kind words, they mean a lot :)